08.14.01 - I have just put of the first bit of the story. It's all I
have written right now. I've been reading it over and have been
thinking that I may want to revise it and put it in third person
narrative. There is a link at the bottom of this page so that you can
e-mail me and let me know what you thing about any part of the story.
I'm wondering, what do you think the relationship between the two
characters is right now? What do you think will happen on the way
to the rave and what do you think will happen if and when they get
there? That's all for now.
08.24.01 - I have added a bit more onto the story. Right now they're
about to leave the apartment. Some more has been revealed about their
relationship. It's still not clear though. I'm still trying to
figure out how the story will end and wether this is really a short
story or more of a novella. The more I write, the more I think that
this story is supposed to be longer. Feedback? Anyone?
E-mail me some feedback.!